When I behold the world, it gives a bitter smile to me.
When I behold the world, I see a men twisting in a glass of dark coffee that is not sweet I think.
Then, I see a kid crying alone inside of fear.
And, I see a soul weeping in a bowl.
Then I smile to the world, I see it smiles back sweetly.
I smile again to the world, and then I see a rainbow made of colorful candy that is so sweet I think.
Then, I see the kids playing in a park of joy.
And, I see a men swimming in a glass of milk and smiles to me
Do you ever see what I’ve seen?
Do you ever feel what I’ve felt?
And do you ever ask who the world really is?
Could you tell me please?
Does the word “you” answer my question?
Or the word “me” does?
Could you tell me please?
Could you tell me please?
When I try to behold again, I see the same dark thing as I have seen before
Then I try one more time, I see spiders creeping up on the wall inside a dark room
But then I smile, the spiders return to butterflies and flying like they’re dancing in that shiny paradise like room
Then I stand out keeping a smile and question in my heart
Is the world as that beautiful?
Do you ever feel what I’ve felt?
Who do you think the world really is?
Could you tell me please?
Does the word “you” answer my question?
Or the word “me” does?
Could you tell me please?
Could you tell me please?
If I may answer your poetry above... world is you, world is your environment, world is where you belong, and world is US
ReplyDeletehahaha.. that's true! :D
Deleteeveryone has their own answer nyu. Because, they have their own world.
whether it's themselves, or it's somebody else who is very meaningful for them.
that's world!
:)
Keep Smile, and Chill!!
when i read these poem and knew that this is not only a poem but also the lyric from a song you made, I was very curious with "how beautiful" the song is. well, yesterday when you play me some parts of the song, I fell in love with that melody, and well I am looking forward you to record that song, especially the piano version and post the song here, in your blog. I promise I will be the first person who like that song very much. Have a happy blogging, keep writing, keep creative (:
ReplyDeleteHaha.. Yaa mbak tee! ;{D
ReplyDeletejust let us work this out!
You were the first one who listened to the piano version mbaku! Heheheh.. ={P
*woooo.. I have a mustache now!
Wkwkwk..
Chill!